Edely+Vargas

** by Philip Arias ** Edely was born in Puerto Plata, Dominican Republic. She is seventeen years old and has lived in New York for six years, where she finished high school. Edely lives with her father and brother in Washington Heights. She really likes sports and her favorite sport is baseball. In the future she wants to be a nurse to help people. Edely said she is shy, hard worker and successful. First, Edely said she is shy. Shyness (also called diffidence) is the feeling of apprehension, lack of comfort, or awkwardness, especially when a person is in proximity to other people. This commonly occurs in new situations or with unfamiliar people. She likes to make friends, but she said that when she is making new friends, it's hard for her to start talking because she does not feel comfortable talking to other people.But from my point of view she is not shy because when she was talking to me, I noticed that she easily asked me questions about me. I do not think she is at all shy. Second, Edely said she is hard-working. A hard-working person is someone who is diligent in laboring and puts effort into doing and completing tasks.In my opinion, I think Edely works hard every day, not only in terms of her job, but also in her studies. She told me she works in a supermarket. Which means she works and studies at the same time, and it is hard to do both because you have to work hard at your job during the day and then you have to study hard at your university. Edely seems to be a hard worker on the job and at school too.
 * Knowing my friend Edely **


 * Philip A. Arias ESL 94. 1001 **
 * October 5, 2015 Prof. Wiseman **
 * Draft 4 **

Third, Edely said she is a successful person. A successful person is one who knows what she or he wants, knows how to get it, and has achieved the goals and dreams that were the driving force of their life. Edely graduated from high school with good grades and he managed to get into college, which means that she has achieved some of their goals in life. I can see that Edely knows what she wants in life. I mean, she is already got a goal, and the first thing a person should do in your life is to dream something to create it, and she is working hard to achieve their goals. In conclusion, Edely is a great person, a person who can be trusted. I can see that she has a future ahead. So what I know, I can say that Edely would be a good friend, a person willing to help at all times.And a person who works hard every day at work and at university.