jie+zhang

Dear Professor,

In this semester, i think i have a lot of things need to be improve. The most important three is knowing more vocabulary that i can use on writing, having more opinion while i am writing, and make less grammar mistake so that my writing can be seen like native language. For my writing, knowing more vocabulary that i can use in writhing is important. When i am writing, i usually feel that i am poor on vocabulary. i know what i want to write, but i don't know some words that can describe my opinion perfectly. To improve that, i think i should try to memorize more word everyday. My problem is that my short term memory is good, but my long term memory isn't well. i can remember the words' meaning like one or two weeks, but if i don't use them like more than one month, i might totally forget about it. i might try to use more new word on my writing so that i can remember them. the more opinion also important for me. i need to know more opinion on other so that i can quote some when i am writing. i usually spend too much time on thinking about three details. if i write down an essay about support topic or not, the first thing that i choose support or not is which one i can write more details. It isn't which i really support in my heart. just choose one opinion that easier for my to write. The grammar is also the thing i need to improve. When i write down an essay, it is like a free writing. Not like to write a essay. So many grammar mistake are on my essay. Some of them, i think they are grammar mistake, but when i am writing, i don't pay attention on that. On the test. i am nervous and write very hurry, more mistake will appear on my essay. i need practice essay more. so i won't have this feeling when i am writing. To improve each one of them is a hard job, but if i success, i can have a better writing. it is useful in my future. i hope after you teach me, i can write a good essay. i will try my best.

your student Jie Zhang